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首先,開頭段至少寫三句話的這種說法本身就是對學生灌輸性的錯誤。西方國家的寫作對開頭段實際上沒有明確的規(guī)定,很多只要你把你的個人觀點表示清晰即可。 For example: Some people believe young">
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For example:
Some people believe young adults should undertake unpaid work to help people in the community. Do you think it will bring more drawbacks to the community and young adults than benefits?
一看就是典型的“利弊題”,既然是問做“unpaid work”的利與弊,為了人生觀和個人價值觀,以及弘揚“正能量”肯定會選擇“利大于弊”。那么既然態(tài)度這么鮮明,開頭段不如直接了當一些,給考官眼前一亮的感覺。
Intro:
I definitely subscribe to the notion that young people should do voluntary or unpaid work to give a hand to the people in the community, because this practice will bring about twofold bonus.
一句話表明態(tài)度就好,尤其是definitely一詞表明態(tài)度的堅定。
其次,我對雅思考生常提到的開頭段不要多于50個字或不要超過主體段的長度說法感到很是驚訝,如果是老師提到的,那么這也太中國式的本本主義了甚至是誤人子弟。好的雅思作文開頭段在西方是沒有對長短或字數(shù)要求。再說一次,只要把你要說的觀點說清楚就好了。當然不要啰嗦。
For example:
Environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries or individuals to tackle. We have arrived at a point in time where the only way to lessen environmental problems is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
環(huán)保類的作文一直是雅思寫作中的重頭戲,本篇就是一個典型雅思辯論類。由于題目中出現(xiàn)了絕對詞“only”,我相信烤鴨們已看出這是一邊倒式文章,OK,那么開頭段就一定在“50”字以內嗎?
Intro:
Environmental problems have reached such proportions that people feel international organizations must be set up to intervene in world affairs to resolve these problems. Whether this will resolve the problem which is very unlikely as international organizations are just an extension of human behavior. That is, if human conflicts cannot be resolved at home, then they are unlikely to be resolved at the international level. Nevertheless, international organizations do attract attention to the growing problem of pollution and the destruction of the environment. However, although I respect the aims of the international community to resolve the issue of environmental pollution and support their cause, I do not believe it is the best or only way to protect the environment; in fact, it is only a small part of what is needed in a global initiative.
這樣的一個近135個字數(shù)的開頭段,思路清晰,觀點明確整篇下來照樣可以拿到7.5分以上。記住寫作跟喜哥走,保你寫出高分。
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