托福復考近在眼前，和胖虎一起學習托福8～

令人頭疼的寫作

時間總是不夠～

30min要我讀題+分析+打稿+寫作+檢查？

我太難了……

如果你也是胖虎，跟著我來一起學一學段落展開的技巧，讓你有話可說，有理可依，有據可循～

先不急，腳踏實體才不會翻車，我們先來了解下，學霸level的寫作要求：

An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:

1, Effectively addresses the topic and task

2, Well organized and well developed, using clearly appropriate explanations, exemplification, and/or details （充分展開，結構清晰，使用適當的解釋，例證和/或細節(jié)）

3, Displays unity, progression, and coherence

4, Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors

重點來啦！

什么是 appropriate explanation, exemplification and details？

無非就是各種類型的主觀的reasoning以及客觀的supporting。

接下來我們就來看，如何使用客觀的evidence對文章進行論證8～

*下文4個首句也就是本段的中心論點，是后文的推理方式展開所圍繞的中心。

1, Analogy

所謂“類比”就是類推比較的意思。通過對甲事物的分析，類推到與其屬性相同的乙事物；然后從兩者的比較中，得到某種啟示，從而說明某個道理。

(Topic Sentence: The education a person receives in young days is the foundation of his future academic and career life)

Knowledge gained from primary education resembles the foundation of a skyscraper. Without a solid base, how could it endure the overwhelming weight and height of its superstructure? A poorly-educated student will never have a promising tomorrow. It is during these critical early years of learning that a child’s potential begins to show and their learning structure is established.

把理論知識類比成大廈根基，把抽象的含義具體化，更可以直觀的展示出理論的重要性。進行類比之后，再來一個it is xxx that xxx的強調句進行鞏固，可以使你在developing以及grammar上雙贏。還不學起來～

2, Quoting

“引用”為自己的觀點和看法提供有力的論據，使論據確鑿充分，增強文章的說服力；同時也可以增加文章的可讀性，調動讀者閱讀興趣。

(Topic Sentence: We should hold an objective attitude about the relationship between favorable chances and success.)

Kevin Geary used to say, “Success happens not by chance, but because you were given a chance and took advantage of it.” The underlying meaning in this saying persuades us that meeting an opportunity is only a stepping stone toward a potential future success, while showing off before certain people and convincing them of one’s merits and achievements will indeed pave the way to success.

一個名言+一個解釋，妥妥的使你的文章如同總統(tǒng)發(fā)言般的令人信服。

讀不懂？沒關系！再加上一句“說人話”的解釋（The underlying meaning in this persuades us），再沒有文化底蘊的人，也可以明白～

名人名言積累不夠？沒關系！背幾個names + titles，句型精簡含義深刻的表達學起來，你也可以成為名人，你也可以發(fā)表名言～

3，Result of research?

調查報告是反映對某個問題，某個時間或者某方面情況調查研究所得成果的總結。這類信息具有真實性，邏輯性，以及針對性等特征。

(Topic Sentence: Reliance on technology delays children’s development of mind.)

we may quote research conducted in order to discover whether children are doing homework with technological assistance: among the 1000 parents who were interviewed, over 85% admitted the fact that children could never do without surfing the net or sending message to the peers.

數據都是自己編的，不需要你“眼觀六路耳聽八方”地去了解，但是確可以讓考官相信你的有證可循～

4, Example?

大家太熟悉，我就不解釋了，直接上例子～

(Topic Sentence: Computer games are able to tie an addicted youngster to the chair before the computer screen.)

Concrete evidence can be seen in many families nowadays. The seven-year-old son of my cousin used to be so addicted to computer games that he would consume half of his weekend in front of the computer. As time went by, he became nearsighted and his studies were also negatively affected. As soon as his parents realized the potential threat of computer games, they had to set strict rules that prohibit their child from playing them too often.

(Topic Sentence: One of the most essential goal in movie-making is to enrich people’s inner world.)

One example is a classic movie entitled Murder on the Orient Express. The plot is so thought-provoking that viewers are turned into detectives themselves. In the movie, a murder is committed on the train and a number of passengers are brought under suspicion. Motivated to discover the real murderer, viewers are willing to make their own judgement. Needless to say, watching such a movie is just like going on an unforgettable inner journey.

好了，暫時就這樣～

4個evidence先靈活運用起來～